Feedback from Year 11

Our film opening was shown to a year 11 class who gave us their repsonses on what we achieved well and what we could improve. From this feedback, the things we accomplished and done effectively was:

• The lighting in the film - at the beginning especially and with the flashbacks



• Making clear the genre - the music and colours



• Building suspense and tension - the eerie music and the way it is on time with the beginning scene and camera angles

A few suggestions made was to give less away and if possible make the flashback relate more to the opening. To some it appeared as a trailer because the title was at the end. Most of the year 11's decided a voiceover would not be necessary since the film builds enough tension with the music and dark scenes and adding a voiceover would take some of that tension away. The storyline was easy to follow and many of them enjoyed it.