Entry Three: Pitch Feedback

From our pitch, Ms Taylor gave us some very important feedback, which we have incorporated into our final thriller film plan.

Firstly we where told that the knife scene may be hard to carry out, as trying to portray a believable knife slice scene on a small budget may look unbelievable or tacky. We took this feedback, and now the knife scene will instead be from behind the victim, therefore removing all problems of trying to create a gory death scene. This in addition works to our advantage as it in effect creates more tension as we don’t see the death scene itself face on.

Secondly, Ms Taylor suggested that we have the main girl wearing glasses in certain scenes. This is to portray her as closed and that she sees the world in a different light to other people. We have incorporated this into our final plan also.

Finally we where going to use Juliet, a friend of the group member Hattie for the lead roll. However from feedback from our pitch, we realised that she may not be the best choice to use as she could be unreliable, and therefore a strain on our group. We have since elected Nicola as the female lead roll, which has so far worked for the better. We can be sure that she is accessible, and does not need to be briefed on the story line, thus making the overall working process easier.